Your mind cradles thoughts.
Snares creative, flowing words.
Perfect! Now write them.
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Cradled by your heart
Perfect Love, expanding quick
Snared in deception
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Adding this one..
Cradled by your heart
Perfect Love, expanding quick
Snared in deep rapture
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© Bobbie Sandlin
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This is my first 3 Word Wednesday, so I thought I'd keep it short and do a couple of haiku's. I had not done this style in awhile, so this is fun :D Hope you enjoy.
10 comments:
liked the first one !! perfect for writers :)
Yeah, cool!
Welcome to 3WW. These are nicely done. Simple, but well-crafted.
The first one sings to me...
I love the first one, a perfect expression of the writer's process. :)
The second one is more melancholy, but nice as well.
I don't know how to quote anybody, but I'd like to say thank you! I'm glad you all like the first one :) Mark, it sang to me too. I knew it was a gem and it charged me up. The second one, I'm still thinking on. I could take off on it and turn it into a full poem. Giving it thought. ♥ you all!
we writers have to be pushed at times!
I like the conflict in the second one and the third gave me a feeling of passion.
Happy 3WW!
Enjoyed those - especially the first one.
First one says it all.
2 & 3 - Six of one - half a dozen of the other.
I like the "cradles thoughts" - it sounds like dreams - something to hold dear
thanks for your visit and like your fractal on your sidebar especially the "love" and "forgive" ones
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