I think I know you
Complexities abound
Riddles and magic
An enigma, throughout
The world hated you
Belittled your spirit
Yet you stood back up
So bold, and so fearless
I feel all your trauma
You've endured much strife
I gave you much comfort
In the darkest of nights
In patience, I waited
When you closed the door
To pains of the past
That which hurt to the core
And now here we dance
You're wild and you dream
In ideas and in joy
Free thought, creatively
In mirrors you twinkle
My youth in aged eyes
Inner Child, How are you?
Only Love, no divides
© Bobbie Sandlin
Complexities abound
Riddles and magic
An enigma, throughout
The world hated you
Belittled your spirit
Yet you stood back up
So bold, and so fearless
I feel all your trauma
You've endured much strife
I gave you much comfort
In the darkest of nights
In patience, I waited
When you closed the door
To pains of the past
That which hurt to the core
And now here we dance
You're wild and you dream
In ideas and in joy
Free thought, creatively
In mirrors you twinkle
My youth in aged eyes
Inner Child, How are you?
Only Love, no divides
© Bobbie Sandlin
For Carry on Tuesday 13.
For whatever reason, this just flowed when I looked at this weeks prompt. It applies, and it fits me, but it's just weird what inspired it lol. It was a very quick write..less than five minutes.
For whatever reason, this just flowed when I looked at this weeks prompt. It applies, and it fits me, but it's just weird what inspired it lol. It was a very quick write..less than five minutes.
9 comments:
Nicely done. That inner child is so important.
Nice one
I always find that the pieces written quickly are more often than not the best ones. This is proof! Excellent.
Oh-I never thought of loving your inner child.
Very creative!
Whats the point of being an adult.......if ya cant be childish?
No such thing as a mis-spent youth...
well-written and more often quick writing brings out the best in ourselves, this is a proof! lovely!
http://my-crossroad.com/2009/08/we-think-we-know-ones-we-love.html
@ Everyone: Thank you so much! I'd go through and individually address everyone, but for the sake of time, please each of you accept my thanks. ♥ I'm always so humbled and I love that you enjoyed this poem.
Inner child..
I like it very much.
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